On the holidays we went to Australia to see my Aunts house. But before we could the plane broke
down. We had to wait for two hours until we got another plane. By then it was afternoon . Finally we got to the airport In . Australia my mum calid my . Aunty to came pic as up and after half an hour she was there . Come on she said to as . But as we walke in there was my nan waiting at the door and smash went my nans cofee . Hot coffee and glass all over the ground. Mum yelled at me but my nan being a nice person said Marina its fine and hugged me. We wallked into say hi to her dog luna . Nan yelled at Mum inside.
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